Well that was real mature...

Well that was real mature...

Thursday, February 27, 2014

Eye See What You Did There

ADVENTURES IN PULP WRITER'S COMMENTARY

DICK RUBY AND THE CASE OF THE LITTLE GREEN MEN PAGE 7
http://adventuresinpulp.com/dick-ruby-page-7/

            Again, pretty much as scripted. Matt did add two panels: the actual taking off of the blindfold and the brilliant close up of the eye. The former was covered in dialogue so it was not really needed but it probably made the transition smoother. The latter really packs a punch and  it's one of my favorite moments. It's amazing how something so simple can up the emotion levels. Overall, while the action has slowed down, I think we do a good job of keeping the tension high and pulling a shocker to close out the page. Funny note... when the page first went up, Matt forgot to put the blindfold on Dick in the second panel. When I pointed it out his reaction was hilarious. Partially unprintable but funny. I'll give you a hint: Monkeys made of Excrement.

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